tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7845964191766891808.post6162135837064790831..comments2023-09-15T17:43:19.342+03:00Comments on her-twisted-thoughts: some sour vibesangel of lusthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00159792824053168397noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7845964191766891808.post-32003707477752507142009-12-10T23:47:04.524+02:002009-12-10T23:47:04.524+02:00i would change your title to read 'sour some v...i would change your title to read 'sour some vibes'. it would be alot more confrontational and also direct.<br />i think it would go with the poem alot better. <br /><br />by placing your adjective 'some' at the beginning, you are speaking in a passive voice and i didn't get that 'vibe' from the content of the poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7845964191766891808.post-32190633354896854932009-12-10T22:47:32.589+02:002009-12-10T22:47:32.589+02:00Some people irk my soul, sounds like we've run...Some people irk my soul, sounds like we've run into the same people.Janet Caldwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11793404908830681520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7845964191766891808.post-85321104047107444092009-12-10T19:00:34.188+02:002009-12-10T19:00:34.188+02:00wow. some true angst here. ditch those bastards an...wow. some true angst here. ditch those bastards and hang with people that make you feel good....Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.com