I have a bitter taste in my mouth
Must be from swallowing all the acrimony
Of people around me
And not being able to digest it
It is hard to absorb the vibes of hostility
They get stuck somewhere
Between mouth and esophagus
Provoking a kind of nausea
Not even the heaviest of meals
Embraced with fat and stodgy lipids
Ever make me feel
If just I can vomit those emotions
"pig correspondence", A New Collection of Poems
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Here at Lulu our Nickel Hole Press have just published *pig correspondence*,
a book of poems from a few years ago. This will be on Amazon in a few
weeks. ...
4 years ago
3 comments:
wow. some true angst here. ditch those bastards and hang with people that make you feel good....
Some people irk my soul, sounds like we've run into the same people.
i would change your title to read 'sour some vibes'. it would be alot more confrontational and also direct.
i think it would go with the poem alot better.
by placing your adjective 'some' at the beginning, you are speaking in a passive voice and i didn't get that 'vibe' from the content of the poem.
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